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鹧鸪天·见雪图忆姊

2013-04-20 08:28:05| 分类：词 | 标签： |举报 |字号大中小订阅

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十五年来忽转身，已然不见绿罗裙。轻狂总付黄梁梦，迂拙孤偎岗上坟。多少事，碾成尘，尘中寻你累心神。倘卿明我潜相忆，来趁清宵那片云？

家姊病故四年了，无日不在我的臆中留连。今见图中大雪，想起小时候生活在东北的乡村，逢雪她都会拉着哥哥做的冰车，我坐在车上她拉着跑。有时翻进雪坑人影也不见。人事匆匆，留住的唯有记忆。人却抓不住。她去时才三十七岁，而我如今已长她两岁了，还在污浊的尘世间挣扎。

十五年来忽转身，已然不见绿罗裙。踏春扶起山羊角，掷雪依从耍赖人。
多少事，碾成尘，尘中寻你累心神。倘卿明我潜相忆，来趁清宵那片云？

这样?哪个更好？
山羊角指经我梳头。
耍赖也指我

十五年来忽转身，已然不见绿罗裙。山羊角上红纱线，滑雪车中耍赖人。多少事，碾成尘，尘中寻你累心神。倘卿明我潜相忆，来趁清宵那片云？

我这样改了。这样语感上柔和一些

山羊角上红纱线，
滑雪车中耍赖人。

这两句指她给我梳头，给我拉车，虽然没指明对象是谁，但就算读者理解成了她，也是顺的，也是合理的。都是回忆。

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